tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8662228612082937016.post631868100234729699..comments2024-02-12T02:35:36.382-08:00Comments on The Writer's Voice: Aida Brassington Guest Post and Giveaway!Emma Michaelshttp://www.blogger.com/profile/00472202702058908057noreply@blogger.comBlogger6125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8662228612082937016.post-46479504970096448672012-05-05T15:41:48.422-07:002012-05-05T15:41:48.422-07:00That's a hard question. But I don't think ...That's a hard question. But I don't think writing the kiss is the hardest part. The hardest is building up to the kiss. If the writer wants to make it meaningfull he/she has to make the readers care for the characters before giving the kiss (unless the idea is to shock right from the start and catch the reader by susprise).<br />But I belive that to write a good kiss scene, simplicity is the best way. Going with too many words will probably just make the scene goofy.Ana C. Nuneshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08129634263678456267noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8662228612082937016.post-25855648938285625762012-04-29T05:55:33.354-07:002012-04-29T05:55:33.354-07:00This is all good stuff - I just wish you'd inc...This is all good stuff - I just wish you'd included a snippet of the scene you ended up with!Rachel Cotterillhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08969719330048416996noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8662228612082937016.post-57319606456158748832012-04-28T17:50:23.286-07:002012-04-28T17:50:23.286-07:00This is an interesting blog -- reading about the p...This is an interesting blog -- reading about the people "behind the pages"!<br /><br />I have a blog award for you! Come check it out!<br /><br />http://www.theliterarylioness.com/2012/04/ive-won-sunshine-award.htmlThe Literary Lionesshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09442461745014863511noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8662228612082937016.post-82424278236042319922012-04-28T15:39:19.656-07:002012-04-28T15:39:19.656-07:00I could never be so bold, as a reader, to tell a w...I could never be so bold, as a reader, to tell a writer how to write a scene, but this is what I love to read in the scene; tenderness, a brush of finger tips along the jaw, slowly moving forward as the lips touch in the sweetest moment, and the electricity of that first kiss that you feel all the way to your toes - that is the kind of first kiss I like to read about. Of course this all depends on the type of book and scene in general, as some stories just call for that adrenaline jump of smash mouth LOL Thank you for sharing with us today and for the lovely giveaway opportunity. <br />dz59001[at]gmail[dot]comDenise Zhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17743337429214149474noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8662228612082937016.post-84447764180048473912012-04-28T12:23:54.984-07:002012-04-28T12:23:54.984-07:00This comment has been removed by the author.Crystal Cliftonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07370869604648663730noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8662228612082937016.post-90963536888601085242012-04-28T12:19:44.463-07:002012-04-28T12:19:44.463-07:00hmmm a good kiss eh?
It all depends if you want it...hmmm a good kiss eh?<br />It all depends if you want it to be serious or funny, but if I were you, I would try to focus more on the emotions rather than the physical actions of the characters. It should be awkward and a bit nerve raking because lets face it, kissing doesn't come naturally unless you have been together for quite awhile. You would probably want the characters to not only be focused on the kiss, but more so the person he/she is kissing. Perhaps even the background noises. And of course, make it passionate.<br /><br />Don’t know is that was all that helpful, but hey, i tried.<br />Thanks,<br />Amanda<br />ajtse@hotmail.comAmandahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07577405801136511832noreply@blogger.com